Can I just tell you that I feel like you wrote a poem about me!...I feel exactly the same way! GREAT POEM!=]

I loveee this one! i dont know why but i really liked reading it. it has a really good flow =] and just to let you know,i like both sides of you. so youre not really stuck. you just need to be whichever side of you is needed by people..if that made any sense. lol

This poem could be much deeper and you can use some metaphors! It needs some improving, it could be a lot better, still I like the topic.

Really like the idea behind this one, it's different to most of the poems I usually read. The uncertainty over which "version" of you that you prefer also makes the poem really effective. xXx