Would someone Notice!

by Rowena Linley   Aug 23, 2007


Would some one notice
If I left this world
Would some one care
If I went away
And never come back
The knife I gripped
With steady hands
I stared at it
Knowing what to do
Nobody would notice
If I left
No one would care
I press the knife against my skin
And paused briefly
But then I pressed hard
The crimson blood
Came pouring out
I transfer the knife
To my bloody hand
And do the same
I start feeling faint
Nobody will notice that I'm gone
Nobody cares about me

*Some times this is how I feel! Not as much now, but I do feel that nobody cares about me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I can imagine you feel that way sometimes but remember: there are people caring about you, you just dont always notice it. i have had a suicide attempt not rlly long ago... when i was in hospital, more people came to see me cos they cared... now i know im not alone. remember you are not alone too ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    If you only knew how many times I feel this way! 5/5