Very heartfelt and emotional, you can feel the pain within.

I know you aren't dear...but you will be...and you know it too...smile a little today for dhaval, okay? :)

what are the odds that you write exactly how i feel? relationships are sucky and we know it, na na na na na! :D

For such a long time I've been trying to write exactly what I just read now. This is amazing, I can tell it comes straight from the heart, heh. I don't know what to say. I just wanna make a copy of this and hang it on my wall, haha. I absolutely love it. 5/5.
Never stop writing.

` Liz =]

This is a wicked poem! i luv it ! the rhyme relly gd! wicked stuff

5/5
tc,
Aisha

Right now i feel the same way but i really dont know what to do. i dont sleep i dont eat and its like when he left my world fell apart and now im just trying to figure out what it was that i did wrong... nicely put
5/5

Little long but fair... :LoL:

I luv your poem!
Keep up the good work!

I really liked this poem...
so strong emotions
you are very good!

Great work.beautifully written

Great work.beautifully written

I know the feeling and you expressed it so well

This is a very true expression of what it feels like after a relationship falls apart. When we speak in cliches and are lost in the pain. Captures a moment in my life a couple of years back. Nice writing