Hope

by Heidi   Aug 24, 2007


There once was a girl
lost and alone
but then you came
and gave her a home.
She thought nobody cared
but you proved somebody's there.
With you by her side
she have no reason to hide.
You lifted her up from her despair,
all because you showed her you cared.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Loved it.

    Short and sweet right to the point

    =D

    XX3 Nia

    Check out my poems if you can, thx!

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Nice flow... nicly riten. I like it. Good job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Try to elaborate on your emotion. Well writen, and very sweet :) just a bit vague and simple.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Really nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by nisha

    Nice

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