Echoing Screams (Huitain)

This poem here brought tears to my eyes. With the resent passing of my step father I know this feeling all too well. Sitting through his funeral and looking at his picture…it just didn’t feel real. The tears wouldn’t stop but at the same time I could NOT grasp the fact that he was actually gone. Still on some days I think of him as though he’s at home…and all over again it hurts when I remember he’s gone. I fear that years from now I will still be in that same state. Enough rambling…my point is this is a poem that so many can relate to. It’s the painful truth of life. I’m in love with the last line…PERFECT ENDING..for me ;)

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...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.... i cnt believe im almost crying rite now ... *sob*

what a pwrful impact this one had..really..really amazing..

"..Screams echoing the only sound.."
haunting and a very very poignant write.

love it

~Wake~

Powerful sadness in this piece.

A fantastic write cindy very sad. your words convey your feelings with power. 5 from me best wishes ben thompson

Very creative hon. xox sam