This is an excellent huitain cindy, congrats on another wonderful style accomplished, love the flow, and you know its a flawless 5/5, the title is perfect, keep the styles coming!!!

"Yelling for you with no reply
Screams echoing the only sound"

those lines really moved me..ive experienced something similiar..not in death..but i can really relate to those lines..wow cindy, your amazing..keep it up

An amazing piece of poetry 5/5

For so long your death I denied
Watching them tuck you in the ground
Yelling for you with no reply
Screams echoing the only sound

these lines stood out the most. a wonderful piece of poetry!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Amazing really heart touching lines so full of emotions.
For so long your death I denied
Watching them tuck you in the ground
Yelling for you with no reply

Loved these lines, holds so much meaning .

Love
chavii.

Absolutely beautiful and very sad indeed. You have put so much nformation in so few lines!

well done and take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Hiya Cindy,
I loved this one, it was structured well, flowed brilliantly, emotional and heatfelt, made me feel a little sad.
love Tara-Kay
x

As always Cindy...excellent job....your formed poetry is really good....beautifully sad....

Great poem, I've never seen ths style before, And intesting gone, keep it up.

Sorry I meant to say interesting one.

It's such a beautifully-written, emotive sad poem that almost made me shed tears. I was utterly touched, yet again, by you, Miss Cindy...

Dear cindy i do not have any knowledge about huitain types of poem. i just can see this poem is nice. take care 5/5

I can see the apin in your heart. great work

i alwasy pray for your happiness.

Very creative hon. xox sam

A fantastic write cindy very sad. your words convey your feelings with power. 5 from me best wishes ben thompson

Powerful sadness in this piece.

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...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.... i cnt believe im almost crying rite now ... *sob*

what a pwrful impact this one had..really..really amazing..

"..Screams echoing the only sound.."
haunting and a very very poignant write.

love it

~Wake~

This poem here brought tears to my eyes. With the resent passing of my step father I know this feeling all too well. Sitting through his funeral and looking at his picture…it just didn’t feel real. The tears wouldn’t stop but at the same time I could NOT grasp the fact that he was actually gone. Still on some days I think of him as though he’s at home…and all over again it hurts when I remember he’s gone. I fear that years from now I will still be in that same state. Enough rambling…my point is this is a poem that so many can relate to. It’s the painful truth of life. I’m in love with the last line…PERFECT ENDING..for me ;)