by LovelyDivine Aug 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Dear Diary |
by Fsams
Good poem. the repition is nicely used and it clearly shows the function. Keep up the good work |
It was cute! you repeated dear diry over and over which i think kind of messed up the flow but other than that well done! |
I thought this poem was really cute!=]..and thank you for the comment on my poem, i really do appriciate it! |
by Nix
I don't like it. Repetition in the first stanza( with the word"heart") destroys flow. It isn't bad but you could create stronger atmosphere. |