I don't like it. Repetition in the first stanza( with the word"heart") destroys flow. It isn't bad but you could create stronger atmosphere.

I thought this poem was really cute!=]..and thank you for the comment on my poem, i really do appriciate it!

It was cute! you repeated dear diry over and over which i think kind of messed up the flow but other than that well done!

Good poem. the repition is nicely used and it clearly shows the function. Keep up the good work

Tc
Fsams