A beautifully penned poem of love... Superb expressions of deep feelings... An amazing piece... Best wishes... Good luck to you dear... 5.5....

Nazeer

Omg..ur a great poet...love the way u xpressed urself..keep it up..5/5 =)

Wonderfully done. Good imagery, and such feelings flow through well enough to bring us all along with you. I can see the day.