Young Love

by MischieviousMya   Aug 24, 2007


They say I'm too young,
Naive none the less.
But why do they care?
That only adds stress.
My hearts still broken,
Doesn't mean I don't care.
Cause I'm waiting for him,
Those three words to share.
Patience is the key,
I'm learning that too.
Love is a battlefield,
Whether you win or lose.

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  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem is really good.=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You are so right! Why should others comment on how you feel? They'll always have opinions, but come on what's the big deal? 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I really liked this. The flow was perfect. This peice was short but simple and expressed your point with little words, which is great. Never let others tell you how you feel. I have plenty of peices on that. Lol.
    But once again, great job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 17 years ago

    by Francine

    I like...and young love is always the most purest, when you're young enough to JUST LOVE, lol til you get older and the past holds you back. Anyway good job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Short, sweet, beautiful!

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