Soryr to hear that...but as my mom puts it there is more fish in the sea......i like ur poem

I really like this one. I think it's one of your best:)
I dunno, there something about it, like an unspoken essence that linger's around you.The repetition was powerful. and added to the effect.
Very Emotional, with a pang of truth:)

Keep it up.
Elaine.

I can totally realate this poem to my life :(

I will give you maximum ratings. Thanks for sharing its unique and outstanding

Tc
Fsams

Ooo. I like this one a lot.
It portrayed your hurt and anger very well.
The thing I like the most was the repetition of "You Lied". It just helps add to the emotions. Beautifully done. :) Overall: 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

I liked this, but the repetition was annoying me by the end. I like repeats being used in poetry, but only to an extent.

The emotion of anger and hurt was strongly conveyed. Well done.

The anger in this is felt from beginning to end. it radiates from each and every word and that made the whole piece very powerful. i didn't like the amount of fillers you used (I, you, and etc) i thought it disrupted the flow a little. however i liked the repetition of "You lied" i thought it managed to get your point across very well withotv being overbearing. nicely done.

Wow! wot an original piece, really really good, short and simple, i loved the repetition of words it worked really well.

Well done

5/5

Gary

DAMN grl all i can say is i feel u 2 da fullest in diz poem i went thro dat 2...........check mine out and comment for me plz!!!!!!!!!!!