Yesterday, today, tomorrow we stand,
Trying to keep up with society's demand.
Soldiers are dying,
Babies are crying,
As we fight for our free land.

^^ I really loved that stanza. This was a wonderfully written poem. I liked the flow and the way you have worded it all. People should really start treating life as if it were a miracle, instead of taking so much for granted. Great write.

Take Care:)

Your writing is absolutly beautiful, inspirational, and completely amazing.
It puts me in a trance, and makes me want to live a better life.
Thank you for that.

Wonderfully written,you really got the point across,especially with your message about your friend at the end...glad he's ok...keep it up! 5/5

Absolutely beautiful.
I have never read any better.