Wow! This is, well... Mind-blowing, truly truly fascinating piece.
Your work always contains so much creativity and your ideas, well, they are simply brilliant. You are honestly one of the 5 best writers whose poetry I ever had honor to read. Refreshing atmosphere in this poem makes it so much different from the most pieces that you can read here. Your work is authentic.
And often after reading your words I am speechless for little while. I applaud you for this one. I enjoyed in each stanza, and I have no negative critiques, your words are free, wild and they always shape something original and impress me.