Nice.
very powerful.
i like it.
it made me cry, a little bit.
its sad.

but, hunny, why dontchu write about happy things?...
xx

I will . =] .. death is just a phase. =] . <3

-- Chloee.xox

Very sad indeed, I agree write less RIP poems and some more mixture. I cans say that you have the ability to do it.

Aw babe this is such a wonderful write but the concept is really sad...excellent job though!

Brooke<3