Would you

by Sara   Aug 25, 2007


Would you even care if i was gone,
do u even care if i've been in pain for far too long
would u even notice if i was not around,
would u even notice if i were to hit the ground
did u even know that i loved u with all my heart,
even though u torn it apart
have u ever thought,
this might even be my last breath
the last time you'll ever hurt me,
the last time i'll ever try to make u see
did u know that this could be,
the last time you'll ever make me cry
would u even think,
today just might be,
the day i die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very short poem yet so meaningful and touching and well written...keep it up...
    and keep writting;D

    All the best wishes

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Excellent writing..
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    Me the 10th visitor, 1st to read, 1st voter, 1st to comment and 1st to appreciate. Lovely poem with lovely feelings...

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Really well done i love it hope to see more.

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