Freedom...

by Helen   Aug 25, 2007


Fearlessly they fly to the doom that awaits,
as soul killing weapons assassin through bear streets,
a lifeless world, silent yet it screams.
As the worlds terror is left at our feet,
and yet we still fight, for freedoms at hand,
but what is freedom? if your soul is taken, and your story diseased.

(This popped in my head after watching transformers, it reminded me of the war going on in Iraq, i wish i could of made it longer and better, i will work on it later to try and improve it.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, it was a nice poem and you were right in every single word you mentioned

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Yes. i like this alot. it is very good. i dont think it needs to be much longer. it is excellant just this way!!ur friend

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Very true.
    && nicely worded.

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaz

    True... words.. awesome wrk.. wish i could give more thn 5..but still the wrds u used r really gr8.. sumthng tht the wrld should realise

  • 17 years ago

    by Krista

    Absolutely beautiful.
    great work!
    :]]]

    thanks for the comment!!

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