Knife (acrostic)

by enigmatic_prey   Aug 25, 2007


Key to escape from such a wretched life--the only thing I can say.
Numbs one's self from all the pains and sorrows that stay.
Indeed, it takes away doleful tears, memories and wrath
Footprints, perhaps of one's lost dreams,even the lost love's warmth.
Except for the fact that my fate is to end my life with this knife.

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this my first attempt to make an acrostic...sorry if it sucks...thanks...

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This poem does not suck,it was great

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Ur poem dont suck its wicked i love it xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Good poem, but it would be easier to read it without space between the lines. Anyway it has excellent atmosphere and emotions are greatly expressed. It is very effective! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I liked it quite interesting 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    This poem doenst suck ^_^ 5/5 depress??