I love the whole poem, from the beginning 'til the last word in the very last line.. it's fabulous and did touched my heart ( a combination of sad and hopes, what an intense emtions!

Wow...I completely loved this one and the images it created in my mind were breathtaking ^_^ A true pleasure to read and I'd love to see more like it in the future =) A perfect 5 =D
*Tears*

You both did an awesome job on this collab, there's a powerful message within your words as well. Great job.

This is a very nice poem! I love how you show how it can effect you.

5/5
V.Well done.

A very fantastic poem...i love it ..i can feel the emotions of your poem...good job

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You guys did a great job!! Like the message as well. Again, great job guys!!

A very beautiful poem! Good job.

An absolut beauty .. i must say.. u guys did a remarkable job. really touching and i did find hope in there.. amazing work..
Loved the wpoem,,esp. this stanza..

"..The night hides the ocean's mystery,
unable to see what lies ahead.
The salt burns the cuts and wounds,s
they were deeper than I had expect.."

and

"..Slowly the wounds heal
with the sea
burning for a moment
I no longer bleed.."

brilliant.. keep it up

~Wake~

I love it. It's very very good.

I really love it. Excellent!!

Wow!!! Incredible poem, it has so powerful atmosphere and rhythm of whole piece is simply amazing. I love this one, it has some breathtaking lines, very deep. Congrats to both of you, well done!