Me the 1st visitor, 1st reader, 1st voter and the first to comment on this lovely expression,,,,

Nazeer

I feel that you would be a great novel writer as i have said before lol you give beautiful distinct descriptions of things in a very unique way

Very unique and it flowed very nicely...thanks for the comment on my poem=]

Brooke<3

I loved it...i also thought it was unique...thanx 4 the comment on mine.........~*~Cindy~*~

That is so deep and moving...that is how i dream of writing...so descriptive and captivating and not even ryhming...would appreciate if you could check mine...tell me how i can imprve!!

I really really like this poem...keep it up

This poem was really good. I liked alot of your others too. You are a talented writer. Keep writing.

Really different but still amazing. You have a way with words to describe such deep feelings. i was blown away.
xx
Taegan Emily

U know what i like about ur poems...the way u write it n the way it just flows well...gr8 piece

Aww!..how sad!!
i really like this poem because it has that truth to it....its really sad, and i culdnt imagine my life without my mom. wow...
u put lots of emotion into this. its great!
Aly

Wow that was really sad .. great though too deep and meaningful.
Great piece.
Good job.
5/5

I loved this poem! It was sad, but it had alot of truth in it. It was thoughful and imaginative. I thought that you did a marvelous job on this poem. But I would take a look at the last line... it gives a hint that maybe you copied and pasted it... :)

Beautifully written! You're an excellent writer; keep up the great work. :)

Amazing poem! i loved it!!! keep up the great work :)