A well written poem, provoking its reader into thoughtful change, but our Bread of Forgiveness is Leaven, our Savior has Risen.
Peace and Blessings

Amen, you have inspired me to edit

The concept is quite intriguing. With such a wonderful rhyme scheme and flow, as well as originality. This was a very pleasant read. 5/5

marcella

Greate poem simple, yet strong! well done

This is a great poem and it speaks the truth in every way...i love the way you use your words and make me think about what your trying to say in this poem! Great job tho i loved it! 5/5

Hi Michael

Does your brain ever rest? Dont you ever feel the urge to just talk rubbish? You seem to be constantly fighting a political and religious battle for the good of all mankind! Must be tiring - but at the same time very rewarding. :) You have my utmost respect that you dont waiver from your beliefs and that you are constant. Obviously, this poem on hypocrisy does not apply to you?!

Good write. You really do have the ability to make me think.

All the best

Mo

"The laws enforced by democracy
Freedom to express hypocrisy..
For every word that is freely spoken
There is a rule made to be broken"

I loved this. Such a powerful and beautifully penned piece; the rhyme was flawless and the message was effectively delivered using some poetic tools. Well done :)

This poem is so true. I love the society aspect of it. Well writeen great job once again. 5/5

Excellent Poem!!

5,5**
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