by xPerfect Chaosx Aug 25, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Darkened room lit by bloody candle light |
by yaneris
It's nice i like it |
At first I thougt it was the woman being sacrificed. Very bitter... Satisfying in a sadistic sort of way. All I have to say for improvement is that in this context that its a 'rite'. ^^ |
What an awesome read. It took me on a journey, and was so strongly written that my heart started racing with each line. I will definetely read it again, and, probably, again, until I wrap all the meaning of the words into a story I can play out in my head. This was indeed an awesomely, transforming piece which I could say, I loved. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
by GoodMEMORIES
This is like crazy good.... i really enjoyed reading this.. i love your choice of words,, it was amazing |