Btw you spelled cears wrong its cares just letting you know you have not done bad at all but you have mistake but if you want more marks and people to comment try spelling the poem with the correct words you get more marks and it becomes the best one out the lot good luck at getting the marks for your poem andrea and stephen from darlington xxxxx :)

Hey its me again i think you need to work on it abit because you have the seard in it spelled wrong its spelled scard and you dint and thats spelled dont thats what you mean you have to have your spellings correct or it dont make sence and dont ryme good look andrea and stephen and sis kirsty xxxx