No Sight or Sound

by xoxShorteexox   Aug 25, 2007


This isn't slang, but it won't let me put it under the regular love thing.

I’m hoping to drown in these tears,
This pain is becoming unbearable,
Everything is reminding me of your face,
And I feel like ripping my skin off my bones.
I’ve been trying to sew my eyes shut,
Then everything will just vanish,
My ears will still hear your voice and our songs,
So, I’ll put take away my hearing by living in silence.
I’ll pray no one comes knocking,
I hate having to explain the same story so many times,
There’s a little sound coming through,
Our song playing from somewhere nearby.
Everything is coming back so clearly,
A picture in my head of all our memories,
It’s all starting to become clear,
I’ll never get enough of you, no matter what I fear.
I’ve lost the little bit of sanity I have left,
Food just doesn’t taste right at all,
I’ll stop eating and see if that helps,
All our laughter is ringing in my head.
I’ll take a few pills and hope they’re the right ones,
These will be the seals of my true fate,
I’ll write a letter with no sight at all,
Pray I wrote down the right letters and didn’t mess up.
As I take four pills and write down a few last words,
My will is to give whatever is left to whomever,
I’m signing my signature in hopes it still looks the same,
As these words are written, “I still love him, even with no sight or sound.”

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Alright..No offense, but with all the letters from the didn't, I'm and I'lls...It's annoying. Makes it hard to read, and makes the poem structure look like crap.

    Second, the poem doesn't flow, is seems to jump around a whole lot and frankly it's kind of annoying how many mistakes are in it. That's probably why you couldn't put it in the category you wanted. Try fixing the comas and certain words and then move it to the category you want it in.

    I may dislike you and you may think I'm doing this to be rude, but I'm not. Your older poems are amazing and really good. This stuff you have posted now that I just looked at while browsing..I'm shocked to be honest. It's not even good. It's just a bunch of emo-ness written down.

    I miss your old poems. I'm not even going to rate this one, cos this doesn't deserve one. The form and flow is off, and it jumps around to much. It would be unfair to you to rate it and it wouldn't be an honest rating.

    -Megan

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