Alright..No offense, but with all the letters from the didn't, I'm and I'lls...It's annoying. Makes it hard to read, and makes the poem structure look like crap.

Second, the poem doesn't flow, is seems to jump around a whole lot and frankly it's kind of annoying how many mistakes are in it. That's probably why you couldn't put it in the category you wanted. Try fixing the comas and certain words and then move it to the category you want it in.

I may dislike you and you may think I'm doing this to be rude, but I'm not. Your older poems are amazing and really good. This stuff you have posted now that I just looked at while browsing..I'm shocked to be honest. It's not even good. It's just a bunch of emo-ness written down.

I miss your old poems. I'm not even going to rate this one, cos this doesn't deserve one. The form and flow is off, and it jumps around to much. It would be unfair to you to rate it and it wouldn't be an honest rating.

-Megan