by Nuh Aug 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Beautiful.... |
by Marly
That is such a sweet poem, i envy the girl you wrote it about =) |
by Kris
LOVE IT!! |
by GoodMEMORIES
Its really cute, like really really cute.. i liked it.... it flowed well... keep it up |
by Michelle18
Much better ending....now that you changed it , it really makes the poem have a spark to it... nice work. |
by Michelle18
Aww this is a really cute poem... i liked it.. it flowed nicely...but i dont think it ended right.. maybe you should add more or change the ending...but thats just a suggestion... overall it was a good poem..i still give it a 5/5. |