That was really good, i enjoyed readin it soo much, u use such good choice of words to express yourself xxx

Aww this is a really cute poem... i liked it.. it flowed nicely...but i dont think it ended right.. maybe you should add more or change the ending...but thats just a suggestion... overall it was a good poem..i still give it a 5/5.

Much better ending....now that you changed it , it really makes the poem have a spark to it... nice work.

Its really cute, like really really cute.. i liked it.... it flowed well... keep it up

nice work

LOVE IT!!

That is such a sweet poem, i envy the girl you wrote it about =)

"And I just spent another day thinking why god spent more time on you.." that was my favourite part its so cute.