Comments : One step away from the edge

  • 17 years ago

    by Brie Anna

    I really liked this poem it's full of emotion keep it up 5/5 :]

    *~*bee*~*

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written, I can relate to it. You have a way with words, true talent.
    This one contains excellent atmosphere, and a lot of emotions.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Tears are just stories
    The ones I keep inside
    No matter how much you hold me
    It won't ever stop me cry-

    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by blackheartslove

    Greatly moving and Captivating
    I held my breath till the end...... loved it