Alone ( my first poem submitted on here. hope you like)

by Olivia   Aug 25, 2007


I can have 100 people around me and still feel alone. Like the whole world matters but me.

I can be in the same room as you and feel invisible. Like the life is drained out of me.

I can even sit behind you and feel like a wall is separating us. Not allowing us to speak.

but when you smile at me, the wall fades, and my colors come back to me.

and when you talk to me, i feel like I'm the only one in the world that matters.

you make me feel whole and complete.

only when your around, i don't feel alone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ViCkY G

    I lub ur poem
    & itz real good 4 bein ur 1st poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NeveR tO geT disgusteD, wE arE herE tO givE lighT oN tO youR poeM anD wE dO. foR youR gooD writinG wE alwayS givE higH valuE... excellenT writinG... 5/5

    luzaN