Comments : The story of zack (part one)

  • 17 years ago

    by GothChick

    This is a really good poem! I totally understand where ur coming from. Great job!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by nering

    I hope you are on your way to success...good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Hope Things Get Better!
    I Did Love this Poem THough. Much Wanting To Read Part Two >_>
    xD
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Aww, that is so sad, hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by ava michelle

    Hey that was great! i like the emotiion that you put in it