The story of zack ( part two)

by resisting reason   Aug 25, 2007


It started out fine
many years ago
he was happy and loved
and he didn't even know
his family was there
they cared
and they always will
even after their little boy was killed
for a few short years
he shed no tears
even though he didn't have many friends
he would pretend
he wasn't sad
until something happened
something bad
he was 8
when he was raped
and after that his life was never the same
he was embarrassed and hurt
he felt his life was worth....
NOTHING!
though for some years
the memories were suppressed
inside he was suicidally depressed
but he wasn't sure why
all he knew was that he wanted to die
and even as he grew up
he couldn't forget
he could only regret
not being stronger
and though he's grown
he doesn't see himself as a man
he trys but he never can
now he cuts himself
to see how much it bleeds
he pierces for the pain
and he burns for the scars
now his life
is under the knife
the needle
and the flame....
this is the story of Zack
and his life will never be the same

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  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    Was this poem about you? did this happen to you

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    Great poem
    Really well written
    I loved how you expressed yourself with this poem.
    Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Zomfg!
    I'm so sorry. =[
    Especially since this was you! O.O
    This poem LEft Me Staring at the screen a ew Extra Minutes Before I could remember to comment. This is really A Great Poem You have here. Normally They say that the second Part of something always screws up the first, but not this. This Exceeded the first! I'm truly awe'd.
    Take Care, Hope Things Are Well.
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow very deep poem and may i say very well written! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Britt

    Omg...
    i really like this poem..
    its really good...
    iv done things in my past that im not very happy about..
    and i want to give others advice and be there for them when it dont even take my own advice...
    u should never feel like ur life is worth nothing...
    just remember that u will always be loved..
    even tho u might think that...
    there are ur friends and family that deeply do care and love u..

    XOXOXO
    Britt

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