by Corruption Aug 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
This tragedy has befallen us, |
by damont
U survived away from each other and didn't talk. wat brought u back to each other what words were exchanged? or do i wait till the end for all my ?'s to be answered |
by Sydney
Pretty good : ]] The emotions you displayed in the poem were really expressed well. On to the next = D |
by Sumit Ojha
Nice poem... DO you always write poems in a series... anyway, your poems are really awesome... you are a nice poet :D Keep up this good work |
Pretty good..i better understand how the time apart is the climax in life..onward to part 4 |
by nikki
It was awesome, very good writing skills you have. i loved it. |