Goodnight

by Michelle18   Aug 26, 2007


We're finally together,
Laying side by side.
Hugging and kissing each other,
Under the covers we hide.

We stare into each others eyes,
We're just so excited.
We love one another so much,
We just can't fight it.

Tears of sweet joy,
Stream down my face so slow.
I just want you to hold me close,
And not even think about letting me go.

Is this a dream?
Because it doesn't seem real.
But I'm so glad it is,
Because our true love is what I feel.

So just hold me tight,
As I close my eyes.
Fall into your arms,
And finally say goodnight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. this was a very beautiful write. the emotions were intense, of course. And overall, it was a very touching piece and a heartfelt read. This poem, at the end, made me smile. (: [and i dont like to smile] The power of your words are strong! lol. :D anyway. great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow thats sooo beautiful
    Is this a dream?
    Because it doesn't seem real.
    But I'm so glad it is,
    Because our true love is what I feel.

    wow!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I liked the consecutive rhyes very much. They are really nicely penned. The flow is alos good in this piece. You have managed to keep it cool and lovely. I gave you just 5/5

    Tc dear
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by janiL

    Wow..0_o

    this is really great..^_____^

    "So JUST hold me tight,
    ..As I close my eyes."
    it's like..you feel so safe and whole by his side and you need not say anything more..

    i love how you wrote this, so very full of emotions..^__^
    another fave! 5/5!

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