I will live one more day

by judith redmount   Aug 26, 2007


The earth is mine
so I will live one more day
till I succeed
I am looking at stars
and the miracles nearby
unblocking the blessings
of God
Because of the stripes
I will live one more day
stand up and succeed
Drink water at the well
I need this earth
To live one more day
Release the offer
I need an agreement
with God
Just to live one more day

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  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    What agreat poem, this is absoutly amazing
    xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This was pretty good...i like it... althought there was one minor mistake that i see....

    "Release the the offer"

    ^^in this line you used the word "the" twice....but you probably just typed to fast or something. very common mistake.

    other than that..this was well written.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mish

    This was very good. thank you for your comment!

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