Do i love you

by danielle   Aug 26, 2007


You love me
but do i love you
you hug me
but do i want to hug you back
you kiss me
but i would kiss you back
my mind says i love you
but my heart says its only a crush
you love me
but do i love you

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Ive asked myself the same thing before about someone

    Excellent poem Great job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    This is so common! I have definitely felt this way before. Great poem.

    One suggestion... the first line

    You love (me)

    I would add me
    Oh, and the sixth line "but i don't kiss you back"... if you could formulate that into another question it would match the rest of the poem. :-)

    Great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply deep!!! Like it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I cant help it
    You better know about your crush:)
    hehe
    good poem
    put the i's in capital friend
    its a good poem as you have wrote it in a truthful way
    5/5
    well done
    keep it up