This is good...i like it..but at the end you kinda lost the flow..and the rhyming went off.. maybe it was just the way i read it. i dont know... but try putting it into stanzas. overall i give this one a 4/5.

I love this damn poem it reminds me of me and i love it so much its one of my favorits

"It's all good,
It's all great,
It's only another inch of my heart filled with hate."

^^I love this part!...great poem!

Brooke<3