by Stazifer Stazington Aug 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
People say |
by Whisper
I love how people might first look at it and be like: this isn't a poem. But then you read it and by the end it's a powerful poem. I like how it rhymes at the very end. I usually connect more with poems that rhyme so I thought it was a nice touch. Good job Bunny. |
by Kelsie
Uhm the beginning of this is a little interesting, but i like the ending of it and that the message gets across. nice job. |