My Tears (Acrostic)

by enigmatic_prey   Aug 26, 2007


Moaning as my tears keep streaming down my cheeks.
Yearning for the friendship that right now is hard to fix.

Time after time, I drench my bed with these mournful tears
Especially because of the thought,forever you will never appear.
As I think about the words you said in the middle of the darkness,
Remembering the time, you assailed me in such rudeness,
Saying and telling me ,I don't have to burst in tears because of you.

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another attempt on making acrostic poems...tell me what you think about it....(",)

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  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Nice one good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Great one... Good writing for your age kababayan... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Huh I loved it and quite descriptive 5/5 i need to attempt an acrostic poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Wow mayor!!ibang klase!!parang professional.,!!hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    Always a nice poem...^_^ 5/5....always broken friendship....^_^