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ExcellenT writinG..... 5/5

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luzaN

Have read your poem and it great. the friendship built was fantastic. it shows the importance of friendship and what it does on a person. Nice portrayal.. keep it up!

Beautiful piece Hebe, I loved it, you have a real talent for poetry, keep up the great work, take care my friend.
Phil

So sweet.. is really good to know that you have that kind of a good friend! hope all the people have one!.. truly really nice poem

Thats gorgeous, lol
I loved the way you ended it, it's something that i bet everyone can relate to, mine was a soft toy of the andrex puppy, lol
5/5
*Gem*

Never a truer word spoken.. to tell one's secrets is to trust, and sometimes the most trusted are those who cannot talk back, or love anyone deeper than the human who cuddles them at night! I'm sure my life would be more complicated without my teddy bear, as yours may without your Grandparents doll. Very well done on a wonderful subject. xx

Thank you all for the comments. I used to have this doll, not anymore, I got it when I was younger. But I was always happy with it.. I agree that sometimes your best friend is not able to talk back.
Again, thanks for the r/r/c, I really appreciate it!
Take care you all

Ha! Such a fun poem. I have a teddy i tell everything to, he smells of lavender and helps me to sleep at night:)
This is a great poem, gots a feeling of innocence about it and think its actually really cute.

Kelly
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This is so sweet! 5/5

Hihi =]! That's cute ^^ Nice how you build the poem up, if you know what I mean.. that at the end, you tell what it's about =] And it makes a good end too!
5/5 again.
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Haha this is a sweet poem. Your best friend a doll caught me by surprise lol. Great job
-vino

Hahaha omg
funny yet cute poem

i liked your poem

That was really good. I love the ending :) well I also feel the same as you in this poem.

Anyway the words you have used was simple but it gave all the depth needed to make this poem great. Keep up the awesome work!