A Painful Mist

by The Angel of Secrets   Aug 26, 2007


Shattered into a millon pieces,
Broken by a loveless fist.
Feelings shut in inside a shell.
Inside the soul a painful mist.

Questions left unanswered,
You don't listen anyway.
Careless, painful, hanging on,
To face the next day.

Unloved soul inside a body,
There's nothing for me to see.
I'm just soaring, waiting to die,
Nothing can fix me.

You can buy me all the things in the world,
Open a million doors.
What you want is already broken,
So take my heart, its yours.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    So touching, sad and emotional. You described pain greatly, I enjoyed in this piece. It has many excellent and very original lines. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is excellently written, with great wording, and a lot of emotions. My favorite stanza is:
    -You can buy me all the things in the world,
    Open a million doors.
    What you want is already broken,
    So take my heart, its yours.-

    Keep up, 5/5 from me

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