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by NyellMoonlight
This is excellently written, with great wording, and a lot of emotions. My favorite stanza is: -You can buy me all the things in the world, Open a million doors. What you want is already broken, So take my heart, its yours.- Keep up, 5/5 from me
by Nix
So touching, sad and emotional. You described pain greatly, I enjoyed in this piece. It has many excellent and very original lines. 5/5