Great poem.....and that note at the end is gonna be me :(

A beautiful poem for a beautiful friend.. Though this poem is very sad it shines with the love that you have expressed.

Someone whom sacrifices everything for the happiness of his children is a true giver, a wonderful father and someone to be commemorated!

I have a friend whos been through similar trials 5/5

What a noble thing that guy did, gave up his life really to help his children do the best they can do. such devotion.

5/5 david

Beautiful poem....he sounds like a great dad.. and I like the way you've wrote it.. keep it up.^^