by AlexTheLion11 Aug 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Your heart is like a melody, |
by Lisa
Wow. |
by Natalie
Great work.....spork is a very luckky girll |
I read this again and I'm still so amazed that I felt I had to comment again! lol I love the way you used a music box to describe her. It's so sweet! You write so well Alex! 5/5 (if only I could vote again....) |
This is so beautiful! You're full of talent and grace with words. Dont ever think you aren't!! You inspire me so much. 5/5 |
I like this poem a lot. If these are ur true feelings for someone, then they are very lucky. Ur poem is very inspring, and I look forward to seeing what else you written/ are writing now. |