I like this poem a lot. If these are ur true feelings for someone, then they are very lucky. Ur poem is very inspring, and I look forward to seeing what else you written/ are writing now.

This is so beautiful! You're full of talent and grace with words. Dont ever think you aren't!! You inspire me so much. 5/5

I read this again and I'm still so amazed that I felt I had to comment again! lol I love the way you used a music box to describe her. It's so sweet! You write so well Alex! 5/5 (if only I could vote again....)

Great work.....spork is a very luckky girll

Wow.
u blew me away with this one
amazing write alex..
seriously u got amazing talent
read my work when u can
takecare:)
-Lisa