A very enjoyable read the flow was off in places except for this it was very good I like your choice of words my favorite line is "The power of desire will keep me awake"

Short, sweet, true! nice read and well written.

Excellent poem..i really enjoyed the self confidence in this one...in most poems, people usually bring themselves down...and in this one you were lifting yourself up...

great work.5/5

This poem is amazing, i love the wording in this one too,
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Excellent piece for me. I love the meaning and the clarity in this piece. Its lovely 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Very good poem, Wouldnt it be wonderful if we can all live out our dreams :) . I am wondering however what is your dream? well with all this confidence I am sure you will fullfil it. Great poem and good luck!

Very positive piece, nice work. I really like the message behind it.