I love reading all your poems you are really good. have a great day!

Hey,
awesome, just great =) you're right it is just like a story, but then a uhm horror story..I did enjoy reading it, the flow is good and you have an excellent choice of words. the poem was kind of like playing in front of my eyes like a movie, it was freaky but I think that, that makes it a good poem 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

I found myself spellbound by this novel like poem and pleasantly surprised by the summary of its meaning at the end

Your a talented write. I like it.
I hope you continue with it. Reading
it the first time, was really great. :)
I give 5/5!!

Very much like a story but one with a good flow, I quite like it. Good portrayal of emotions throughout and a good atmosphere.

5/5 well done :)

Wow..this is a very impressive piece of writing...you did an amazing job...there was some sort of imagery to this one...

the flow was great and every word captured my attention more and more...

nice work.5/5

Long but beautiful
great work
5/5

Really great poem..i loved it..great imagery and I liked the style of it..good flow as well..though some of the punctuation seemed off, at least to me..5/5 well done.

This is a very good poem. very sad.
I like after every paragraph type thing, you have something one of the characters says.
I also really like the line, "the scars will fade, but never disappear."
keep it up
peace
soffe

I thought on seeing the length of this poem that by the time I had got halfway I would want to stop however this was not the case it was beautifully written with a lot of strong deep emotion and it kept the reader interested. 5/5

So..perfect..

Wow. i loved this. it was awesome. it was very long but it was great. nice work 5/5, i loved the ending.

Now this, this is stunning to me. I can't express how much I enjoyed this poem. The story portrayed behind it was excellent really deep and meaningful which expressed so much. Imagery also so beautiful to me altogether this piece was beautifully sad you created such a rare read. Well done. ~Mel

This is a brilliant poem excellent grammar and the feelinga nd emotion was great.
xx

I really think this is an awesome poem. It really speaks truthfully about how we heal. We keep falling for what seems like ever, but in the end, we always get better. And it's true the line that repeats, "scars may fade but they will not disappear" I really like that line because it's true.. they stay there to serve as a reminder of the lesson you've learned. Well done. 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Amazing poem. so beautifully written! awesome job
-Potter-

This was a wicked poem, loved reading it, uber well done 5/5

Wow.. Amazing! I love pieces like this! Powerfully written!

5.5**
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This was beautifully written...I love the imagery you portrayed in this, created very vivid pictures in my mind.
Flow was good throughout and I loved the ending.

This was really long, which i liked! the way you wrote it and what it was about was great! it had so much emotion in it! 5/5

~Kristina