A new romeo and juliet

by Antonysbabyqurl2009   Aug 26, 2007


A boy and a girl
The best of friends
From elementary to high-school
From beginning to end
Through all those years their friendship grew they both felt the same
But neither of them knew
Each waking moment since the day they met they loved each other sunrise to sunset
He was all she had in her terrible life
He was the one who kept her form her knife
She was is angel
She made him smile
Though life threw him curves she made it worth all the while
Then one day things went terribly wrong
The next few days were like a sad song
He made her jealous
On purpose he tried
When the girl asked
do you love me?
On purpose he lied
He played with jealousy
Like it was a game
Little did he know things would never be he same
One day she broke down felling very alone
Just her and the blade no one else was at home
She dialed his number he answered hello
She told him she loved him then hung up the phone
He ran to her house just a minute to late
Found her lying in blood
Her heart had no rate
Beside her was a note in it her confession
Her love for that boy her only obsession
As he read the note
He knelt down and cried
He grabbed the knife
That night they both died
She was found in his arms
Both were dead
Underneath her note his hand writing saidI loved her so much I never knew that all this time
She loved me too

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Good job! this is breathtaking!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    He was all she had in her terrible life
    He was the one who kept her form her knife
    --awsome line, don't usually like love poetry, but yours are great
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Antonysbabyqurl2009

    Aww that was so adorable i would have never came up with anything like that... i wish that i had a boyfriend like that who really cares for me and loves me like that...your a really good poem writer and i wish to be just like you one day....your a really good friend and no one can say other wise....love