I like the tone in this poem, well done. I think it flowed nicely too. I wish you made this poem a little longer but.. it's still a great poem, keep up the good work.

Thanks for the comment.

This made me cry.... 5/5

Really good poem, well done 5/5 keep it up

Awesome poem!! *hug* theres a hug for you. =) great job! love your poem