Saffron Darkening

by Common Sense   Aug 26, 2007


This was actually written May 8th, 2007, but I haven't uploaded it yet. The most hilarious thing is that it's not going to make any sense unless you really think about it. Otherwise, it's just gonna sound like a bunch of pretty words smashed together xD Haha

Melody drapes over wind like the scent of sarcastic lime trees, blinking through the dismal silence of night. Our panorama view paints the arcane valley of sunshine-gold lilies glowing softly, perceived by a scarred, pallid lace moon. Petals breathing sweet essence blush in the grace of her waning majesty. A ribbon twirls aflutter within the air, its hue twin to the dusky violet moss which sprinkles the landscape. Dew pearls upon mint leaves, soon to vanish with the crisp air.

Affable cream lies are exaggerated in nostalgia of this scene, but accepted far less than the bee sips. Amongst these copious ferns of doubt do grow the ignorant happenings of reality.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Common Sense

    LOL Bee ships xD *sees random miniature ships with bees on them flaoting around* ... ono

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    Oooooooo! so cool when you think about it and really take it in. and hilarious when you just randomly read through it. especially 'sarcastic lime trees' and 'bee sips' cause i thought for a second it was 'bee ships' ...hehehe. i luff you too.

    ~Kiera

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica

    Why are you so damn amazing? i luff you
    ~erica