LOL I THINK THATS HOT

This is soooo good. It all sucks big time and I can defiently understand your pain, and I can say that I'm going through this right now. I sooo long to be held in the rain, watch snow falls, having no one to talk to. I just wish that I could tell him thathow I really feel and that I long for all these things and that he is the one who can fulfill these voids. I really really like this a whole lot. This just brought up thoughts and emotions that I try so hard to suppress and hide.

Great job.

love the repitition to show your emotion.

This poem does not suck

Really really good poem girly i think everyone can relate to one stanza or another : ) great style! 5/5 <33