It's been a very long time since I've submitted a new poem. A lot's been happening, and a lot is changing.

But here, 27/8 at 1:45am, here it is, a brand new poem, fresh off MS word.
This is about a man who loses love for a woman when he discovers the pure despair in which she wallows, in accordance with the faith she keeps.

I don't have any qualms about any religion, they're all entitled to their methods of doing things. However, I did write this with the Catholic religion in mind. As an agnostic, I retain the belief that our Maker would rather we rejoice in that which is given to us and take in the beauty of the Earth our Eden, instead of degrading our lives with rules and good and evil.

I'd love to hear any feedback, whether comment, criticism or outraged rant, I'm open to opinion. Thanks!
HxR

Wow this is amazing. I can't even copmrehend it all on the frist read. I always read it a few times. Stunning. 5/5